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| On a Lighter Note by Lindelea | 10 Review(s) |
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| Annis | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/19/2004 |
| HAHAHA! that was perfect! | |
| Marigold Gamgee | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 3/19/2004 |
| "That was funny- too funny," Marigold said, mirth seizing her throat as she thought of all the funny things she had read, in terms of the run-on sentence, Mary Sue spoof, and hobbit illness mockery, while her imaginary friend laid a laughter-shaking hand on her shoulder, and she chuckled softly into her pocket-handkerchief. | |
| eiluj | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 3/18/2004 |
| No, you've got it wrong. These are not *alternative versions*, but merely paragraphs from different chapters of the story.... | |
| eiluj | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/18/2004 |
| Please consider finishing this one.... | |
| eiluj | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/18/2004 |
| I don't read Mary Sues, so maybe it's presumptive of me to say that this is wonderfully-Mary-Sue in that throughout the story (admittedly a brief one) the focus is wholly and completely on Mary Sue herself. Frodo is only mentioned as he relates to her. | |
| eiluj | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/18/2004 |
| Ow. That's awful. | |
| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/18/2004 |
| Read this and saw a very short Fabio as Frodo and Pamela Anderson as the Mary Sue! I suspect that her I suspect that her bosom would strain against most anything! LOL Very funny! | |
| FantasyFan | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 3/18/2004 |
| Oh, that's so funny. I didn't know angst could be so hilarious. Thanks for the little diversions. A nice end to the day. | |
| FantasyFan | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/18/2004 |
| There's a sentence for you! But I think you needed some semicolons and colons, just for bouncing-ball texture. Glad to see you were productive today. | |
| Lindorien | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/18/2004 |
| hehe - brave woman! But since you are brave enough to put these here. I am following suit. I really, really like this one, Mission Impossible, but Hobbit Angst has my current vote for favorite. The Shelob one with the perfume bottle was wonderful. Have you seen the movie, 'Alex and Emma' and the whole discussion about 'heaving bosoms'? Welcome to the Darkside. Lindorien | |