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Even the Strongest  by Lily Frost 3 Review(s)
GershwhenReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 4/13/2004
Lovely story. I do so love the twins -- and a gentle, caring Elrond is a treat :)

Thank you for sharing.

Sine nomineReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 4/9/2004
I like the way that you write young Estel and the relationships he has with his elven foster-family. A formatting suggestion: put some sort of divider when the place/scene jumps, like a horizontal bar or a row of asterisks, or something. I think that would make reading some of your stories easier. A story suggestion: you should try to write a story about Estel meeting Bilbo. There's no evidence that he ever did (because, of course, Aragorn hadn't been invented yet when The Hobbit was written) but there's also nothing to say that he didn't (at least, I can't think of anything).(your line about Estel being part hobbit made me think of it)

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 4/9/2004
Wonderful - twin angst, my favourite sort! I know I've read this before (somewhere) but it feels like you've polished it a little. And I like the additional chapter about how Elrohir was injured.

Jay

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