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Fidelity  by Lily Frost 5 Review(s)
pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/21/2005
This is very nice...I wonder who is killing all of them and will the twins be able to handle this with thier father unconcious......Update soon....

KellenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/3/2004
Oh, Lily... WOW. I am sorry I did not review on the MC list; this is easier for me, this morning at least.

I'm speechless. Your powers of description, the intensity... wow. And what's with Elrond? And a disagreement between family to boot.

Very nicely done. I eagerly await the next chapters. :o)
cheers,Kellen

Yuna_DaxReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 4/9/2004
Firstly I'd like to congradulate you on a wonderful series of Twin-Fics that you've published here over the past several days. They are a welcome fountain in a preverbial drought of Elladan and Elrohir fics.
I've read all your recent work and am utterly gobsmacked at the high quality of it all. Am in heaven!!

Please continue :)

Julia AKA YunaDax

Little StoneReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 4/9/2004
Wow. Absolutely chilling! What's happened? This was awesome. I loved your powers of description, you conveyed clearly in one sentence what might have been in an act of complete overkill drawn out to three or four sentences, and even then not fully conveyed. One bit that particularly stood out was this: "Men and elves awoke slowly, blinking the sleep from their eyes and wondering what that sound was, or if there had been one at all." That one sentence told tells the reader the atmosphere of Rivendell and something about Celioril, who awakens and hastens to clear his mind. Wonderful prelude! I'll be watching for your next update!

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 4/9/2004
Hmm - interesting summary. I'm looking forward to more of this!


Jay

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