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The Soldiers  by Holdur 13 Review(s)
HaiReviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/21/2004
Those were all beautiful and well written! I love how each soldier regarded the hobbits in their own way. I think my favorite was Hallas but they were all so good it is hard to choose, thank you!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/19/2004
I came late to this story, but I'm just awestruck. With every chapter it grew deeper and more emotional, and... that ending!! You should be very proud of yourself -- this is a wonderful tale.

Anso the HobbitReviewed Chapter: 3 on 4/19/2004
I really like this story! Very good characterisations! It´s interesting to see the hobbits throught hte perspecitve of the soldiers. Great work.

Bluegrass ElfReviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/19/2004
That was one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read!

pipfanReviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/18/2004
Oh. My. Goodness.
This is simply amazing. Your imagry is amazing, the wording fabulous. This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. You have outdone yourself. Absolutely stunning.

Bluegrass ElfReviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/18/2004
Beautiful story!

JULES6Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/17/2004
Hi Holdur,

This is my favourite paragraph of your wonderful little story, even though it is the last one:

Merry!” Even as he is swept away, Pippin reaches back for Merry. Only Gandalf’s steady hands keep the hobbit on the horse. As if Pippin’s last cry jolted him into action, Merry darts after them and out of the stables. If he could, he would fly and pluck Pippin from Gandalf’s grasp and hold him forever.


So reflective of Merry's thoughts and his feelings as Pippin is taken away from him, even if it is to protect and keep him safe.

JULES

Bluegrass ElfReviewed Chapter: 3 on 4/17/2004
Oh, you wrote more!! YAY!!!!

Bluegrass ElfReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/17/2004
Beautiful! I'm so glad you wrote more!

HisieLomeReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/16/2004
Nice storm imagery. Very interesting take on hobbits and Gandolf. Please continue. Thank you for all of your hard work.

Mina Sedth, Hisie Lome

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