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Sisters  by Grey Wonderer 4 Review(s)
PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/13/2004
This is too cool! Your Pervinca is quite different from mine, and I got the heebee geebies while reading it. It's as if you were describing me and my older sister when we were kids, which is where I get a lot of my material for my Pimpernel. It will be interesting to see how you characterize *her*...

Pippinfan
Glad your muse is "rearing it's ugly head"! I'm happy to see you extending your story. :-)

Author Reply: My muse has gotten quite ugly of late. I may have to put her down if she gets any more ideas. LOL She is keeping me too busy. This was supposed to be a ONE chapter story!

Kit5Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/11/2004
I like this tender view of Pippin's sisters, told through his eyes- our older siblings do much to shape us as people, and this is a wonderful story.

Author Reply: Thank you for the lovely review. This is one of those stories that just came out on its own without warning. Sometimes I do that. In writing this one, I have found myself wishing that Merry and Frodo had a sister or two. I haven't the nerve to attempt a story about Sam's family. So pleased that you are enjoying this.

PervincaReviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/11/2004
Oh, wow, that was so freaky! So many of the things you said about Pervinca are the same with me! (Except for the sewing part - I once tried to make a dress... let's just say the results were less than pretty. Calico does not make for good dress material :P) But the not being able to sing, the throwing tantrums and pouting...it was incredible. Like reading a little biography, lol

This is a really cute way of setting it out too, having Pippin explain his feelings for his sister. Definitely looking forward to finding out what my little brother *really* thinks of our sisters :P

- Pervinca

Author Reply: I think it's so funny that you have so much in common with my version of Pervinca. You really should learn to sew and complete the likeness. This one was supposed to be a one chapter story and it just seemed to have more to say. I am so glad that you are enjoying it.

hobbit_lassReviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/11/2004
How exciting that there will be at least 2 more chapters! :)

This was so cute! I loved hearing all about Vince and Pippins self-deprecating comments were great!

Bravo to you!

Author Reply: I am trying to stop this one at some point. I thought it was over, but it is still coming! Pippin is right. He does have too many sisters and so there will be at least two more chapters of this. Don't want to leave anyone out. Just don't let me start one of these about the Gamgees because I might not live to finish it!
Thanks for reading it and for liking it. Oh, and Bravo to you too! (You inspired that bit about her perfect sense of color and knowing what others should wear.)

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