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| Sisters by Grey Wonderer | 7 Review(s) |
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| Golden | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 12/9/2007 |
| I just saw these little stories and they are all so very good! I enjoyed every Chapter very much! And the last words Merry says... ach...*sigh*..I can SO understand him. I would trade with Pippin at once. Having siblings... yes, that would be great! Author Reply: Thank you! This is one of my older ones and it is always nice when someone visits an older story and takes the time to let me know that they enjoyed it. Thanks so much, Golden! | |
| Shana | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/23/2004 |
| SQUEE! That's just adorable : ) Your stories make me happy, and I just had to review this one, because my family's just like Pip's: three girls and then my little brother. I'd be Nell, although I have never made any of my cousins eat a worm. They're all much smaller than me and I'd get in fierce trouble ;) I love how you bring life into a bunch of names in the appendices, you're very talented, although (not to be rude or anything) the words 'smial' (very easy mistake to make) and you seem to have a bit of trouble with commas. But absolutely wonderful characterisation and description and loads of squeeful pippin! : ) Author Reply: Thank you for reading. Somehow, I never got the review in my email and so I just found it tonight. I am glad that you enjoyed this and thank you so much for the lovely review. | |
| Hai | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/14/2004 |
| That was so sweet! I liked how you wrote Pippin's perspective on each sister finding what he did and didn't like about each! The first chapter was cute about having to wash the dishes. The last was best! Makes you feel kind of bad for Merry! It was wonderful thank you for sharing it! Author Reply: I re-wrote that last chapter several times. I am glad to hear that I finally got it right. I worried over that one the most so it's nice to hear that it worked. Thank you for the review and I am glad that you enjoyed this. | |
| hobbit_lass | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/13/2004 |
| What a great end to a wonderful story! As always I love how you have Merry and Pip talk to each other! And the way he wanted to trade all 3 sisters for the pony was hilarious! I laughed out loud when Merry thought he could take Nell and win,and Pippin was like yeah right! That was excellent! Family is something that we all want to trade at some point or another, but would miss terribly if they werent there. Great Story! hobbit_lass Author Reply: Thank you for reading this one. I always wanted a pony and never got it. No one would trade me either. *sigh* | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/13/2004 |
| This has been an absolute gem of a story! I love very much Pippin's take on these sisters of his, especially the bit where he contrasts their attitude when he gets in trouble. And of course it would not have been complete without Merry's take on it as well. I'm so glad you showed how he felt about being an only child, and of course Pippin would not really want to trade--most of the time anyway! Now, how about a story from each sister's POV on their baby brother? | |
| PIppinfan1988 | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/13/2004 |
| This is a "rare treat"--reading about another author's portrayal of certain characters. So alike, and yet so different. A fantastic ending! You have a brilliant imagination, Grey Wonderer! Thank you for sharing it! Pippinfan | |
| Pervinca | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/13/2004 |
| Hehehehe - my own little brother was lucky. His voice broke quite quickly. If he had had the cracking problem, he would not have heard the end of it from his dear elder sister :P I used to tease some of my guy-friends so much, hehehehe. I was so mean :P Merry doesn't really need to trade - he's almost a part of the family anyway! :) But I'm glad Pippin came to his senses - a pony instead of a wonderful sister like me? No challenge at all :P I think it's great that such a little idea became such a wonderful story. Fantastic work GW! - Pervinca Author Reply: Thank for all of the wonderful reviews. Lets me know how this worked. I also enjoyed writing this one and for some reason, I see Merry as one of Pervinca's biggest fans. LOL I think the two of them are both very strong-willed. Hey, Pip had his chance, but I am very sure he would have regretted it. A pnoy would have no idea how to remove a bucket from a hobbit's head would it? | |