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Home To Heal  by Clairon 2 Review(s)
mayaReviewed Chapter: 16 on 11/7/2004
Oh goody- Eldarion's awake, Faramir's leg is OK, and Minas Tirith is celebrating. But wait- of course you had to add that last bit just to remind us that the baddie is still at large, huh?

Hurry up with that next chapter, will you please?

cheers,
Maya

BranwynReviewed Chapter: 16 on 10/22/2004
Ooo, it sounds like Faramir was walking around on a badly maimed leg, doesn’t it? Pallando seems like a bottomless pit; hey, leave some grapes for Faramir! I liked that Arwen was giving her son elven physical therapy—massaging his legs, when he was in the coma, so they would not wither. Amusing that young Eldarion doesn’t want to exhibit any sign of weakness whatsoever in front of Faramir, LOL. Finally, a happy evening at home for the steward and his family, but why do I think this quiet, domestic bliss will not last? A surprising twist that it is Cirion who has the ominous dream, not Faramir (though not at all implausible since that sort of “gift” is said to run in families). I am guessing that the stranger in blue is Pallando’s friend and fellow wizard Alatar. Sounds like he has gone over to the dark side…


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