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| Breakable by Lindorien | 1 Review(s) |
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| Rose Sared | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/21/2004 |
| sorry my heart, you are going to have to unpack this a bit more to make sense to me. What happened at the end. Lovely vig until then, but then I lost the plot. (PWP I know.) Could you expand a bit for the terminally dim? Rose Author Reply: You are hardly the terminally dim. I'm going to pull this one for fixups because I trust your judgment. But give me a hand? What's bugging you? This is an exercise in flashback I was messing with. I wanted to see how it would fly for anybody who didn't already know the underlying premise of the exercise. Now I know - it doesn't. So, please expand on where your lost and then I'll pull this and mess with it. Okay? Muchly appreciated for anything you'd care to tell me. Hugs, Lindorien | |