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Of Merry and Pippin  by GamgeeFest 4 Review(s)
Elf FriendReviewed Chapter: 9 on 1/31/2005
It was interesting seeing through the eyes of someone else. ^^ Also, you might want to run spell check; it should be "racking my brain" instead of "wracking my brain." ^^ Just thought you should know...

Author Reply: This story certainly required multiple POVs, there was so much going on. Each POV revealed a little bit more. I fixed the typo on my hard drive, but never got around to fixing it here. Thanks for reminding me. :)

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 9 on 12/13/2004
I really like Estella's point of view. She and Vinca make a formidable team - and Merry clearly finds them much harder to counter than a few hundred orcs or a Witch King. Rightly, I'd say. Keep him in a state of bemused confusion, Estella - it will do him good!

Author Reply: Vinca is the "formidable" part of the team, Estella's the trusty sidekick, lol. I imagine that after dealing with Estella all those years, orcs and nazgul looked like a walk in the park to Merry. He got knocked down a peg or two here, he'll be a bit more humble around the girls from now on - as he should be. ;)

longcleeveReviewed Chapter: 9 on 12/12/2004
great chapter hehehe what a cute story!

Author Reply: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading. Hope you enjoy the rest as well.

EruviluiethReviewed Chapter: 9 on 12/5/2004
Another brilliant chapter! Very well written and it rounds out the story as we now have everyone's view (except Vinca but we basically know her thoughts from Estella). Terrific, thanks, keep more coming!

Author Reply: I think if I told Vinca's POV, I'd have to up the rating to PG-13, lol! Thanks for reading.

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