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The Winged Shadow  by Pervinca 2 Review(s)
EverlightReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 3/7/2014
Hmmm... I never thought about how a passing shadow might effect them. Their reactions, thoughts and emotions were realistically depicted. Good job.

WillowReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 7/9/2004
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
That was really good!
I think it was really good how you managed to convey the emotions felt by all the characters emotions.
Very good, I really enjoyed it.

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