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| Duty by Lindelea | 25 Review(s) |
|---|---|
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 8/15/2010 |
| Hooray! And bless Aragorn for following it all as he could! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 8/15/2010 |
| A terrible way to learn the possible truth, but he had to know before the trial! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 8/15/2010 |
| He has yet the truth of his father's position to learn. But they do have these days together! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 8/15/2010 |
| It must seem almost too good to believe! Now, to see the army clad--and a couple of Hobbits as well! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 8/15/2010 |
| Bless Ioreth for her thought on where to find extra Kingsfoil! And bless the boy for his swiftness! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/15/2010 |
| It is a horrible promise he has made her, but one that is certainly understandable. And, for the moment they are safe. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/15/2010 |
| A wonderful glimpse of the life remaining within the city during the siege. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/14/2010 |
| So, they stay with Bergil's aunt, and not in the house in the Street of Lampwrights, then? Interesting. And they sound like very normal small boys! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/14/2010 |
| And somehow I never saw this one? Ah, to rectify the oversight! | |
| Nienor Niniel | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 8/25/2006 |
| *sniffle* I've read your corresponding stories already, but this one is especially great, because the events are told from the perspective of minor characters. Very good. You managed to convey the dreadful situation that waiting for the fall of the City must have been. The notion that Bergil would have had to save his cousin from the orcs like this... chilling. But as we know, things end well! All the best, Nienor Author Reply: Yes, happily, things end well. I don't think I could write a story where a terrible outcome was inevitable. There has to be a satisfying ending or the Muse won't bite. | |