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The Breaking of the World  by Coreinha 4 Review(s)
TithenFeredirReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/31/2005
That was lovely, so bittersweet. The first person POV makes it somehow more poignant. I'm going to look for your other stories. TF

GalimerilReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/30/2004
The ending of this brought tears to my eyes. It was a beautifuly written piece! Don't hesitate to write more!
Galimeril ;D

Author Reply: Aw, thank you!

If you're interested in more of my writing, I have seven or eight other ficcies up on this site!
Look for my username - Coreinha.

calenoreReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/30/2004
Wow, this was well written. I liked the emotion you put into it, the different perspective on what might have happened after Legolas and Gimli sailed.
When I finished reading it, I wasn't sure whether I felt depressed or glad. I think that's a good sign for your writing, though. It can be read on more than one level.
Nice work!


Author Reply: Thank you very much!

In all honesty, this little ficlet fell out of my head in a single afternoon. It just came out of this one line ('my name is Legolas') that I didn't even include in the fic!

Anyways, thank you for the kudos - and feel happy! Legolas and his friends are all together again!

Little StoneReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/29/2004
That was a beautiful story with a unique ending. It is wonderful to encounter a tale of the end of the world with a theme not of sorrow but of joy. It reminds me of a Czech song which says, approximately, "Sleep is sweet, so I am thankful for tiredness." Your prose is truly lyrical in its simple complexities. It draws in a reader, takes him on a journey and sets him to peace. Thank you for sharing this story.

Author Reply: WOW!

This is the bestest review EVER! Seriously, this truly put a smile on my face. This story was the product of about an hours work, and was never beta'd, so you've made me feel REALLY good about myself.
Thank you for a well-thought out review.

xoxo

Cor

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