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When The Evening Comes  by Pearl Took 2 Review(s)
good_one_pipReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/23/2004
Very good story, Pearl. It's amazing how much our hobbits have grown up. Very thought-provoking, too.

Connie B.Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/22/2004
Wow! What a fantastic story. You captured a part of Merry and Pippin's changed personalities that few others have.

It is sad to think that they were changed so much by the war, but no one can go through something like that and remain innocent. The fact that they restrained their anger at the ruffians shows that their enate hobbit goodness was still in tact. Their going ronund to every town to help will be a healing for both themselves and their beloved Shire. Hope what I'm saying makes sense.

I'm stil awed by this one. Great job.

Connie B.

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