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Maids Enough For All  by jenolas 9 Review(s)
galathilReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/3/2013
Hi Jenolas,I have just come across your story. I found it interesting and funny.
I hope the King enjoys his letter from Legolas.Can't wait to read more of your work.
Kind Regards
Galathil

KalimaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/14/2005
Ah Jenolas! Once again I visit a story long after you have written it. How very much I enjoyed it, too. Stories are like good friends, yes? They are good when new, they are good in the middle of the relationship, and they are good when old. The Internet is a great thing, that I can catch up when I have the time like this.

The humor was sweet. I loved the touch at the end, as Legolas writes his father with affection. The "...I might dance with one or two of your admirers?" was excellent.

Kalima

Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/15/2004
Heh heh he!

Le RouretReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/15/2004
Charming! A lovely take on the "why-isn't-Legolas-married" question. And it was darling to see him with Eldarion as an infant; I have always pictured Legolas would be a delightful babysitter. Thank you for finally posting this!

LamielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/14/2004
Oh, very clever. I did particularly like the line about Legolas, as a hardened warrior, stoically ignoring the looks and whispers of the maidens. Ah, and I'd be out there drooling along with the rest of them.

Very nice.

TinnuialReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/14/2004
hahaha!! How sweet....what a nice way to end the weekend...with a lovely story from one of my favourite writers!!! :)
Say you'll write about the banquet? please? ;)

DotReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/14/2004
*g* Very amusing!

I loved the sheer delight Gimli takes in his friend’s discomfiture. I must admit, I’d probably be one of those irritating maidens gawking unashamedly on the streets…

I had to laugh when even Mariel, in the height of her distress, had a moment to spare for a loving glance at the elf who, it would seem, is not just handsome but helpful too!

I really liked the image of Legolas with Eldarion in his arms, and especially the way it seems to be a natural instinct in Elves to know how to care for children. It was a rather sad moment, though, when Legolas suddenly realises that if such a joy were ever to be in his future, perhaps he should contemplate the idea of getting to know some of his admirers. But I guess babies tend to have that effect on most people.

Thranduil’s letter was rather blunt! I suppose there was no point in being subtle about it… I really enjoyed the flashback to the last banquet. Estel’s infatuation with Arwen is certainly obvious for all to see! And Thranduil spilt his wine on Elrond! *snigger* I can’t help but think that Elrond *must* have done something to deserve it…! Elladan and Elrohir are just hilarious. I’m guessing the folk of Imladris must dread when that ‘look’ passes between them. What a brilliant plan, though! No wonder Thranduil didn’t have any more banquets for such a long time. Until after Elrond sailed, it would seem!

“Alas, I still have no lady to escort, but perhaps I will dance with one or two of your admirers?” Nice one, Legolas! There aren’t too many people who’d dare to be such a smartass with Thranduil.

Great story, jenolas. I think I read the original version over on ff.net before but really enjoyed it again. It brightened up that sunday-night depression! :-)

docmonReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/14/2004
what fun this was. i had to laugh. Legolas's answer to Thranduil was perfect. I loved how much Gimli enjoyed seeing his friend suffer the attention. And Legolas with Eldarion was a sweet scene.
I have to say, though, I didn't quite get that the banquet scene was the memory of a previous one until the end. I know you prefaced it by saying the letter brought up the memory, but somehow I still missed that it was a flashback. Perhaps a few words can make it a tiny bit clearer.

great job!
monica

Red Squirrel Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/14/2004
LOL
I loved this cute little fic. It was so funny and nicely written. Great job! :-)

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