| Branwyn's Baubles by Branwyn | 4 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 10/31/2005 |
And then, which gift did he come to use most? Ah, the one for which others came to curse him.
It is painful to find oneself a second-rate individual by the standards one measures manhood. |
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| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 4/2/2005 |
| Excellent view of the young Grima, cursed with poor marksmanship in a warrior-culture. We feel the immense frustration he had on trying so hard, to no avail, as others improved but he did not, despite practice. I like the repetition of "close, but not in the center". |
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| mirthor | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 3/30/2005 |
| Nice characterization, & this seems spot on. No wonder he turned to the path he lead. |
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| annmarwalk | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 3/30/2005 |
| Thought provoking, but an excellent portrait of Grima green with envy. Unfortunately, very topical, too - how many young men seek to build their self-esteem through malicious craft, or violence? :( |
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