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Among the Flames  by Lily-Annabeth 3 Review(s)
Lotrgirl1415Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/20/2004
strangly I thought it would end up being a cliche of some osrt like a dream.
such as Sam waking up then looking over to see Frodo asleep near-by or something of that sort.
I did like your disriptions, it kinda scared me even!lol
Though I don't exactly love stories with character death*cough* frodo *cough* i liked this one!
sorry im not very good with reviews!lol
lots of hobbity love,
Katie

DaynaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/6/2004
:::speechless::::

wow. Can't even begin to tell you... oh.my.good.lord.

::giggles:: I'm glad you aren't Tolkein! LOL! :)

Amazing job. Still in awe..... wow.

Author Reply: I read somewhere that if not for Gollum, Frodo would have had to throw himself in. I was thinking that as I wrote this, but also, I wondered what would happen if Frodo could resist the Ring -- I always felt that he should have had the strength to resist it, since that's why a Hobbit was chosen in the first place -- but couldn't quite let go of it either. And poor Sam!

Thanks for reviewing!

docmonReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/6/2004
wow. now that's a different ending. heart-wrenching!


Author Reply: Bitten by the angst bug, I'm afraid. I wanted to explore what would have happened if Frodo had not claimed the Ring, but could not let it go, either.

Thanks for reviewing!

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