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The King's Commission  by Larner 4 Review(s)
Meldewen IlceReviewed Chapter: 50 on 2/24/2005
Oh what a lovely chapter and wedding - I continue to be enthralled by this wonderful story and even more so by the wonderful characters you have created!

Author Reply: Oh, I am so glad you enjoyed this wedding. It is one I wish I could have attended it myself instead of just describing it.

Glad you like the story.

annmarwalkReviewed Chapter: 50 on 2/16/2005
A very pretty and touching ceremony!

Author Reply: Yes, and thank you, Ann, for your feedback.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 50 on 2/16/2005
Melian managed to let them get through the ceremony without crying! Good wedding.

Author Reply: She does seem to be a particularly happy baby, doesn't she?

Thanks for the feedback.

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 50 on 2/16/2005
What a lovely wedding! I almost feel as if I were there!

I enjoyed meeting Ruvemir's old friends. It is clear that he has always been able to forge friendships with those he encounters, and they seem to be firm and lasting ones. I have a feeling that he will need those friends as the plot advances.

Very Well Done! as usual!

Author Reply: Good friendships will last, and I'm glad they managed to make the wedding.

I, too, felt as if I were there at the wedding. Most weddings throughout various cultures appear to have similar themes and traditions, so I chose the most common ones and tried to give them a purely Middle Earth twist.

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