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The King's Commission  by Larner 4 Review(s)
TiggerReviewed Chapter: 63 on 3/1/2005
Hmmm...Interesting developments. I also can't wait to see what happens when Aragorn and this wannabe ruler meet up. And the evidence against Varondil seems to be piling up. Very brave of Celebgil to offer to help go through Varondil's house. That will not be an easy thing for him to do.

Looking forward to the next installment!!

Author Reply: The next installment is there, of course, and I hope you continue to enjoy it.

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 63 on 3/1/2005
This is getting more and more interesting. I love the way the Good Guys are unravelling the Bad Guys almost as quickly as the plots come up.

I'm wondering what they are going to find in that further search of Varondil's place.

And I am looking *quite* forward to Aragorn's confrontation with Landrion.

Author Reply: As you'll be able to tell from the most recent chapters, nothing good. They do have Landrion to deal with next, though. That chapter comes soon enough.

KittyReviewed Chapter: 63 on 3/1/2005
It seems Lord Hardorn and the others were quite effective in their investigations. Can't wait for Aragorn and Hardorn to visit Landrion :-D

I am happy to see they start to recognise even Varondils connections with Landrion. Have I understand this right - it seems he has blackmailed Celebgil into silence? And maybe killed some of the boys? Um ... can I borrow Varondil for some time to use him as a punchingball?

Can't wait for more - it is so exciting and well written!

Author Reply: I don't know if the King will grant custody of the fool to anyone else, but I understand the feelings.

Yes, Varondil was blackmailing Celebgil. Such will do so oftentimes, threatening others to spare themselves.

Glad you enjoy it.

Pasha ToHReviewed Chapter: 63 on 3/1/2005
this is unfolding beautifuly... I llok forward to seeing how the king handles this.

may Eru bless your muses

Author Reply: I think my muses are proving a bit too prolific at the moment, but I thank you for the response.

I only hope this doesn't grow as long as the work that inspired it.

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