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Many Paths to Tread by Citrine | 45 Review(s) |
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Celeste Lucretia Black | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/27/2021 |
Merry... | |
Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/1/2007 |
I'm very glad you linked to this from your LJ. I hadn't seen it before! Very sweet, and I love the way you misdirect the reader and then gently bring one back into the track with subtle hints. Very nicely done. I'd comment more on specifics but I am a fair amount past my bedtime, and tomorrow will come early. Makes me wish you were still writing hobbits. Are you? Author Reply: Thanks for the review, and *sigh* I wish I was too:-( But the last thing I wrote was about four or five months ago. It seems like longer. I miss it. | |
periantari | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 8/18/2005 |
wow how beautifully poignant~ I love how you describe Rosie's thoughts~ very well done! ::glad that this could serve as inspiration for me:: ;) | |
Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 8/4/2005 |
Oh how beautiful! I can easily think this is a goodly part of Rose's motives for having so many children--like you, I don't think a farm lass would lack the knowledge of how to keep from getting pregnant. | |
Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 8/4/2005 |
Yes, this is right, so right, for Rosie and Sam. And she realizes the sea longing which, when finally exercised, will restore him to the other, spiritual love while she is the physical, familial one. | |
Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 7/13/2005 |
Very possibly flowers might be better managed by a certain small Hobbit lad. Lovely. | |
Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 7/13/2005 |
Yes, Merry loves his special cousins, older and younger, misses the former, rejoices in the younger, and delights in both. | |
Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 7/13/2005 |
Yes, he stands there waiting even now to return the heart she gave him, the light of life she gifted to him, to bring her to the delight that awaits those whose frames are mortal. | |
harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 7/13/2005 |
Great - more lovely fluff! *grins, sighs and reaches for computer duster.* Oh and Happy Birthday Marigold. | |
Saoirse | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 7/11/2005 |
Aww...so sweet :) Merry is so kind; I felt so sorry for him when he began to cry while telling the story! Crying is *not* just for babies and lasses, Meriadoc! At least little Pippin was there to remind him he was still in the good of things, adorable story, Citrine. :) | |