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All's Fair  by Inkling 5 Review(s)
LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/19/2005
Hyacinth is a fascinating character! Bless old Aunt Dora...

And young Merry is just perfectly drawn. Congratulations.

Looking forward to more but I fear the rest of the family is up and at 'em.

Author Reply: I’m so glad you like young Merry, being the Merry fan that you are! I do like writing his interactions with Frodo…
Also glad you like Hyacinth…OCs can be risky as you know, and OFCs doubly so.
Thanks for making time to read and comment, Lin.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/5/2005
Poor Frodo! And Horrie's name is quite the joke! Love it!

Author Reply: Thanks! Well, names can be fun…I play with a few more later on, but they’re a bit more obscure than HH, so wonder who will notice…

LeawardReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/5/2005
Good for Hyacinth!

Hmm, Frodo tripping over his tongue with the lovely Hyacinth... interesting! I love young Merry jumping in to defend Frodo. "...at least my mum says I will if I’m very good and don’t sass her back and go to bed as soon as she says to." Yes, Mum's do have a way of keeping the future 'master of the hall' in line.

Looking forward to the next chapter...

Author Reply: Thanks Leaward! Glad you like Hy; as my first OFC she made me a bit nervous....
And Merry’s a smart lad, he knows who wields the REAL power at the Hall!

ArielReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/5/2005

*Purrrrr*

There is NOTHING I find more appealing that a smitten Fro - I am looking forward to this story with great anticipation!

Author Reply: LOL! Thanks dearie…yes, he is one smitten kitten! (sorry, it just seemed to go with your purring!)

Breon BriarwoodReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/4/2005
Hee-hee! I like how first love hits Frodo like a ton of bricks!
Can't wait for more. :D

Author Reply: The poor lad never saw it coming, did he? Thanks BB, glad you’re enjoying it!

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