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Seeing the Forest for the Trees  by Lindelea 2 Review(s)
DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 5 on 2/3/2005
And this is the chapter that got me started. Makes a good deal of sense in context.

Author Reply: Hope it makes some kind of sense out-of-context too.

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 5 on 2/3/2005
So much to love about this one. Diamond and Estella trying to be brave as they waited. The banter between Merry and Pippin. The banter between Pippin and Diamond. The banter between the healer and Pippin. Oh, did I mention the banter? LOL Just love how it reads. Started to do a cut and paste and then realized that I was taking the entire chapter! Also thought Pippin reaction once he was alone with Diamond and was again having Orc dreams was very well done. Your Diamond and Pippin do fit so well together!

Author Reply: O the banter, yes, I think you might perhaps have mentioned that. *g* Always nice to hear when things work.

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