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Pitfalls of the Palantir  by Haleth 4 Review(s)
aelfwineReviewed Chapter: 7 on 7/24/2011
Hmmm, At first I thought Inglor was fishing for an admission on her part of some interest in him? How can he be so completely clueless?

Author Reply: How can Inglor be so completely clueless? That's a question Haleth asks herself at least a dozen times a day.

DaynawaynaReviewed Chapter: 7 on 6/24/2005
once again... wonderful, curious, mysterious, funny.... you never cease to amaze me with your wit and depth. I've decided I WILL print it all out once it's done so I can read it start to finish and find full impact that way.

What a fun ride so far! (where's my walrus, anyway?) :D

Author Reply: Thank-you, Daynawayna

The walrus shall make a reappearance, I promise! He just won't be back for a long time.

Haleth

perellethReviewed Chapter: 7 on 6/24/2005
Wow! Inglor has such a subtle way! pity Haleth's too obsessed to be able to notice his undertones...why! he is taking care of her! Of course in his most particular way... These two won't be able to understand each other unless some cosmic event makes it possible by knocking both of them senseless in each other's arms or something...

I'm amazed at how you manage to bring about so many thngs is such few words. Now I'm wondering about Haleth's dreams and Inglor's loneliness... how long have they been chasing the palantir?

Author Reply: Thank-you, perelleth.

Inglor is quite fond of Haleth. He demonstrates it in a brotherly sort of way and this irritates her.

These two won't be able to understand each other unless some cosmic event makes it possible by knocking both of them senseless in each other's arms or something...

I doubt even that would work.

Haleth





TithenFeredirReviewed Chapter: 7 on 6/24/2005
Hmm, now we have had two intriguing glimpses into Haleth's ever more mysterious past. Was she hunted in Fornost? WHY was she hunted? If someone had told me I'd get this hooked on a story that started with a walrus I would have...looked at them askance, I guess. As if quirky humor and dear Inglor weren't enough to keep me coming back, you put in all these twisty plot thingies!
More, please. ~TF

Author Reply: Thank-you, TithenFeredir, for reviewing again. I'm glad you like the twisty plots. They're great fun to write, but I just know I'm going to lose track of one or two of them somewhere along the line. Then someone will ask 'what about such and such?' and it'll take me weeks to reply because I won't have the foggiest clue what such and such was supposed to be.

Haleth was indeed hunted, but not in Fornost.

Thank-you again.

Haleth

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