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Seasons of a Life  by Mysterious Jedi 1 Review(s)
elliskaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/20/2005
Very nice. I liked it. I especially liked:
‘Twas not a fall, but an autumn fair.
A true king he was, not merely an heir,
His mission: to rule Gondor the fair.

Might want to fix the captial I in LIfe in the title (stupid sticky computer keys) and 'strength' in the last line of the first stanza.

But I don't say that to be critical (but because I alway hope people point out the stupid mechanical thing to me). This was very nicely done and reads well.

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