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| Twin Mischief by Cierah | 14 Review(s) |
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| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 7/18/2005 |
This is very well written,you have the twinns just right...Poor Elladan and his dreams,I wonder if it is a future even. Elrohir dream of purple fields is so different, a contrast to them both. Poor Elrohir,he got the finishing touch of Legolas's prank.... Covered in honey,then in mud.... Gandalph is coming...Can't wait to hear what else kind of trouble they can get into... Please continue... | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/1/2005 |
I love this more and more each time you write... So lovely...Elledan has nightmares and Elrohir seems to bring him some comfort... Please update soon...Great writing | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 7/1/2005 |
Very well done... You can feel the twinns personality come pouring out. The may be twins but are different as well. The closeness you can feel right here. Thier childhood adventures I am curious of,what is the dreams Elladan has? Love to hear more... | |
| Pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/28/2005 |
This shows the closeness of the twinns as the oldest is being punished for trying to go into the woods...Then they are having guest and plan to fool them... Very enjoyable reading... | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/28/2005 |
The twinns were imbarrased that they were caught in rumppled clothes. And thier father even confussed who they were.... Nice work | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/28/2005 |
The twinns are reading themselves to have fun at thier new guest expense...They are having fun in this game of thiers...amuzing... Love this... | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/28/2005 |
It is very interesting to find Elrond and King of Mirkwood used to be good friends...I am curious as to what broke thier friendship up..and can it be rekindled... Keep it up | |
| Pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 6/28/2005 |
Very nice...The Prince of Mirkwood,is he really dead...What a tragidy,even if he was a jerk... Those words are dangerouys,and should be avoided...Legolas saving the Twinns,he should be trained now that he proved himself... Love to hear more....Update soon... | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 6/28/2005 |
I love this story,so great! The fighting with the banshee was a very vivid scene,there is such detail it was as if you breathe this story...Nice job can't wait to hear more... Keep up the writting... | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/25/2005 |
| This is Great! You had me on the edge offf my seat... I love the twinns,but wonder will they excape those dreader woods and what is the secret that lies behind... Please continue soon...... | |