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The Stars Will Light Your Way  by SlightlyTookish 6 Review(s)
PeriantariReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/17/2006
awww what a beautiful chapter--i love the image of Pippin chasing the stars and it's such wonderful description. :)
And i like the ending sentence because it really makes me feel like reading more. :)

Author Reply: It was fun writing a dream state and thanks so much for liking the descriiptions here. It was fun to show Pippin and the stars interact :)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/22/2005
The servant of the Secret Fire and the Lady of Stars has been allowed to use his power to offer the guidance Pippin needs. Wonderful!

Author Reply: I love the idea that Pippin is being looked after even when he does not know it. Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/16/2005
Pippin is lost in the dark and getting tired. Somehow Gandalf manages to have the stars guide hime home... Nice

Author Reply: Thank you! I'm so glad that you are enjoying it :)

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/12/2005
I was glad when the stars had come to Pippin to help him. He was having such a hard time. I wonder if he will come to in the next chapter or if he still needs the stars to guide him further? I will be waiting anxiously for more of this one.

Author Reply: All will be revealed in due time...*raises eyebrow mysteriously* I'm very happy that you're enjoying this story. Thanks, GW! :)

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/12/2005
What a wonderful idea to let the stars lead Pippin back!
I remember that story! I liked it very much.

I hope the long walk back has not exhausted our Pippin too much, and that he will awake soon!
Don't worry Pippin, soon Merry will be by your side, you just have to wake up :)

Author Reply: Yes, Merry is on his way, and I like to think that Pippin knows that, somehow :) I'm so glad that you enjoyed this part, and thanks for saying that you liked the original story as well! :D

Connie B.Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/12/2005
Very nice imagery. I also liked the tie-in to your other story.

It certainly is interesting to speculate on just what is going on in the mind of someone as far gone as Pippin was at this point.

I am looking forward to the rest of this story.

Thanks.

Connie B.

Author Reply: Thank you, Connie! It was so interesting to write Pippin's unconscious mind, and try to think of what he would be experiencing. I'm so glad that you've enjoyed this story so far, and I hope you like the rest of it! Thanks for reading :)

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