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|The Tenth Walker by Lindelea||5 Review(s)|
|Dreamflower||Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 10/1/2007|
|I printed this chapter out to take with me on the plane, and it was a very nice read--this one is quite atmospheric, and yet you still manage to make the POV very "pony-like". Soon they'll be encountering stone-trolls--I look forward to his reacttion to that!!|
Author Reply: LOL, it seems we are thinking along the same lines today... early this morning I was just contemplating Bill's reaction to the stone trolls. *g*
Thanks! And welcome back!
|Althea||Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/27/2007|
|Through Bill's thoughts, you have created a magnificent picture of the worry and weariness they all encounter as they make their slow way to Rivendell. I love how, despite his own hunger, fear, and exhaustion, Bill worries for his companions. I love scene in which Strider and Bill nod to one another. Bill is as ready to take care of his people as they are to care for him. |
Author Reply: Thank you, I appreciate your taking time to share your thoughts. You're right, Bill has thoroughly adopted these people as "his".
|Pearl Took||Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/25/2007|
|Caught up at last!|
This is so wonderfully well done, Lin!! I'm am totally and thoroughly enjoying this story :-)
Author Reply: Whew, good job!
|Larner||Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/24/2007|
|Ah, how wonderful! Dear Bill, and how he seeks to care for his small herd as they seek to care for him. And love the working in of the text.|
Author Reply: Thanks! It's a game to blend the text into the chapter seamlessly, and I hope it doesn't bother anyone that I do that.
|shirebound||Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/24/2007|
|Mention of Rivendell is like a flash of bright light, a sliver of sunlight shining through clouds|
Awwww. I love how they make sure Bill gets as much food as is available for him.
Author Reply: Yes, I think they care for him as much as he does for them. Poor hobbits and hobbit-pony, the pickings are pretty slim at the moment.