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Stone of Erebor  by Primsong 4 Review(s)
Kitt OtterReviewed Chapter: 9 on 6/25/2008
I am biting my fingernails for Bilbo.
Very curious as to whether he had seen a Dwarf lass. At least he found a guide, though he was guided into a most awkward situation.
Why oh why, indeed, Gandalf! Leaving his ring behind... What can he do!? I certainly don't want the ex-burgler tossed over the wall, without a hankerchief.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 9 on 3/29/2006
Bilbo's own imaginings are as wonderful as the rest of the tale! And the description of the dressing of Dain is wonderful. Wonder if the Dwarf he saw from behind was Dim's sister after all? I can certainly understand Bilbo's wish to see a Dwarven lass, after all.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 9 on 12/17/2005
Out of the frying pan into the fire. Poor Bilbo!

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 9 on 12/15/2005
Oh you've no idea how eagerly I've been awaiting a new chapter of this! I just love it.

Poor Bilbo, up to his old "burglar-y" tricks, LOL! and still very good at them, too, for ninety-nine years old! I just love the way you have captured every nuance of Bilbo's desperate thoughts--this really could have come straight out of The Hobbit, truly, you have the tone and voice down so well!

I like his wishing for the Ring. As far as he's concerned, it's still nothing more than a very useful trinket.

And the mystery deepens: who was the mysterious Dwarf, and was it in fact a lass?

And--oh dear me! A cliff-hanger! Poor Bilbo--as he is probably thinking at the moment "confusticate and bebother these Dwarves!"

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