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Ephemeros  by Tinnuial 19 Review(s)
LisaGReviewed Chapter: 7 on 7/8/2010
Lovely, lovely story! I loved the end scene with Elrond and Legolas...heartbreaking and heartwarming at the same time.

LegolassReviewed Chapter: 7 on 8/31/2005

I am reviewing this here since I happen to be... well... here.

This was just beautiful, Tinnuial. I felt Legolas' sadness, and how painful it is that he can't really share this with Estel. The heart-to-heart with Elrond was just heartrending, it was so 'you'.

And it was a nice touch - using this to explain why Legolas was chosen for the Quest. I, too, love taking book canon and weaving tales to fill in the blanks or to explain why certain choices were made.

Nicely done again. Thank you. :-)

FaithReviewed Chapter: 7 on 8/31/2005
youre welcome mellon-nin..*sniff..that was soo sweet...*Sniff...i love it..





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FaithReviewed Chapter: 6 on 8/29/2005
Hannon le..I will keep them up, since theyre obviously working...*evil grin








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Shaan LienReviewed Chapter: 6 on 8/26/2005
I'm glad you didn't have Legolas kill the stag. It was unexpected that he didn't, I thought surely he was and was mentally grumbling about it. ANyway, I've enjoyed this story and I hope to read more.

an exquisite elflingReviewed Chapter: 5 on 8/25/2005
wow..I'm liking this alot. Can't wait to see more updates!!!!
Cheers!

LegolassReviewed Chapter: 5 on 8/25/2005

Another lovely chapter, Tinnuail. I love it that Legolas stays true to his elven character and gentleness.

If you write this tale to the end of Aragorn's life, you're going to have me in tears as I was at the closing of This is My Path. *sniff* Are you going to? Could you send me an email to warn me first (in case you don't want to give away the rest of your story)? I already feel teary.

As for whether I *mind* your pointing readers to Once Upon A Strongbow - are you kidding? :-) I would love for more and more people to read our stories - ANY of our stories - on a friendship that many of us consider so beautiful. So - thank you! *Hugs and kisses*

eliza61Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 8/25/2005
Hey Tinnuial,
A lovely story here. I like seeing how all 4 "brothers" get on with each other. It's especially nice to read about their closeness in happy, peaceful times. I think that helps them to survive the war & tragedies about to come their way. Legolass' insight is great and I too was glad that he didn't kill the stag but I really loved how you had Estel, Elladan & Elrohir support him.
Great friends really do last a life time.

Write again,

Eliza

LegolassReviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/21/2005


It cannot have been an easy moment for the immortal - to finally realise that whereas elves are born to live forever, mortals begin to die the moment they are born. A sad truth for all of us in the 'real world', and a sad one, too, for Legolas in our stories. You wrote Legolas' disquieting realisation well, Tinnuial.

Author Reply: Thank you for the kind review... can't wait to read your new story too...
:)

grumpyReviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/20/2005
Great story, I love Estel and the twins stories. I like that part about the tavern maid who took a fancy to Aragorn. And that Estel has grown to nearly the height of the twins. Poor Legolas has just realized that Estel could DIE.
looking forward to more.

Author Reply: Thank you for taking the time to review...
It's always lovely to hear from readers. I hope to have a new chapter for you all soon.
:)

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