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Interrupted Journeys: Part 4 Journeys of Discovery  by elliska 2 Review(s)
Jay Greenleaf ElfReviewed Chapter: 18 on 11/15/2007
Hi, sorry that I haven't reviewed in a while. I am so glad to see you updating more often now ;b. These last few chapters have been really fun to read. I really hope that Dolwon and Dannenion will get whats coming to them and that Glilavan will be suitably punished. You have really got me so caught up in this story and I hope it will remain so which I'm positive it will. Cheers for now :D.

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 18 on 11/10/2007
Interesting chapter, Elliska. The two boys are taking steps into greater responsibility. I liked Aradrunnon's observation that Galithil had better want to defend the realm because that was a role he'd been born to, and yet that was also sad. And the idea that he'd seen evil and knew what it looked like was appalling.

The two scenes at the end were great, with the boys deciding they couldn't tell one another the secrets they'd been given.

Author Reply: Yeah! What a time for Galithil to decide to start being absolutely good, huh? Neither of them have the complete picture of everything that happened, so they can't recognize how it might be bad. Poor things!

Thanks so much for the review, daw! :-)

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