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| Omentië by Elentari | 3 Review(s) |
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| iluvobiwan91 | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 7/23/2008 |
| I really liked that, very abrupt, very 'you can't break me but I'd like to see you try.' ^_^ I enjoyed it, well done. | |
| Ellie | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 11/15/2006 |
| That was very well done! I like the way you have portrayed both of them. I do pity the guards - for ever having been ordered to take that mission of protecting her in the first place. It is awfully hard to catch a free spirit that has been caged too long. Again, very well done. | |
| Kreestuh | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 1/9/2006 |
| Very good! Aredhel and Eol are one of my favorite couples..though I have one criticism about the peice. Aredhel does not come anywhere near Nan Elmoth until after she comes to Celegorm's home. After a while she gets bored there and begins wandering again- hence she has no gaurds anymore. | |