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Paradox of the Fourth Age  by Alassante 98 Review(s)
mystarlightReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 8/27/2018
I started to read your story and really enjoy it. Thank you for writing and sharing. Hopefully you will update it one day.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 28 on 4/3/2010
It had to be the most painful experience yet, to learn how much of her memory had been stripped from her!

cathleenReviewed Chapter: 28 on 3/25/2010
Wow!

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 28 on 3/24/2010
Well all the pieces are falling into place I see, very good. I still have questions like are they going back to Valinor and resuming their old lives or has everything changed so much that all of that is lost forever? I have more but I think I will wait to see how you tie up all the loose ends. Hugs The Imp P.S. I have loved this story from beginning to end(or almost end I think)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 27 on 2/21/2010
Aha--the mechanisms of false memories begin to unravel as they are put to the test! Now--to see how they will fare once the protagonists come to the Undying Lands!

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 27 on 2/17/2010
Well thankyou for a new chapter stranger! I still cannot figure out how all this will end but I guess thats in your department. It seems everybody is remembering something and it makes it more mysterious than ever.Hope you write another chapter in the not to didtant future and your muse doesn't leave you again, I love this story! Hugs The Imp

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 26 on 9/18/2009
Yes--he now has every reason to live. Poor Elamdir--knowing his carelessness cost the life of Glorfindel! And trying to appreciate the choice of Arwen and the fate of Men will be difficult, I fear.

But if Elamdir and Elladan's wife live, it will be marvelous!

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 26 on 9/17/2009
WOW! That's all I can say, that was one of the best chapters! I was wondering how things were going to play out, still can't see to all ends. I have to find my box of kleenex now. Walks off muttering.... Hugs The Imp P.S. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author Reply: *hands you a kleenex* I'm sorry! I had to do it but who knows? We might still have a happy ending...you must wait to find out. Thanks for reading and reviewing! *hugs*

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 25 on 8/31/2009
A wonderful scene of happiness achieved, even if there will be great grief to temper it! Lovely, Alassante.

Author Reply: Sorry for the late reply! Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. :)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 24 on 6/1/2009
I can certainly appreciate the feeling of violation she knows--poor girl! But at last his heart is at peace, and they shall know joy in one another as is right and proper for the two of them! And in a year, their child shall be born! Delightful!

Author Reply: I'm excited to get them to this point because I have quite a bit planned before the end and this was the hurdle to get them there.(is probably why this chapter took so long for me to get my head wrapped around)

Thanks for the review.

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