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Twilight of the Gods - A Different Twist of Events  by Timmy2222 4 Review(s)
Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 5 on 1/13/2006
A tense and searing chapter! I hope Aragorn regains his right mind; and that Faramir doesn't bleed to death...

RSReviewed Chapter: 5 on 1/13/2006
AWESOME!!!! What an EXCELLENT chapter!!! The descriptions of the different accounts of the battle is so vivid that I was right in the middle it. I bit my nails in this chapter as much as I did the original version. I thought it was brilliant that Aragorn used Arwen's sword to bring down Harishdane. Love Aragorn's words "She is mine to kill!". Revenge is so sweet! (Evil smile---I really am a peaceful person!). Another chapter that had me at the edge of my seat. Keep it up!!!

Author Reply: Yeah, I'm a very peaceful person either... unless it comes to writing. *g* I use up all my aggressive energy in chapters like this one. LOL

- T.

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 5 on 1/12/2006
This was very exciting, you kept me guessing all the way through !
I promise I've not forgotten your story,some domestic things have cropped up as well as the extra editing of my own work.but once I have my next chapter posted,I'll turn my attention to Untrodden Paths

Author Reply: No need to hurry! Life's stressful enough, so take your time when doing things you like.

- T.

BMReviewed Chapter: 5 on 1/12/2006
THis is GREAT!!!! I like this ending so much better than the first one, and I thought that one was wonderful! Please, hurry with more--I'm dying to see how this ends! Great job, you guys are 2 terrific writers, with a talent for characterization and scenes--your characters are so rich and life-like, they leap out of the story, and your scenes are so detailed I'm swallowed whole into the story and hear the sounds of battle all around me. YOu guys are top-knotch writers, please keep up the good work!

Author Reply: Welcome to the story! Thanks for your review. Just one little thing: the main story with all 39 chapters was a co-work with Katzilla (she wrote Rohan-based characters, and I wrote the Gondor-based characters and the Easterlings). This litte "twist" was just my idea of how different it would have turned out if Éomer had not been there on time to save his friend in Dunland.

- T.

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