| This is Not Our Farewell by Nina the powerwriter | 4 Review(s) |
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| Hampstead | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/6/2005 |
| Oh, dear, NEVER write in the present tense unless it's a screenplay! |
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| Andrea | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/30/2005 |
| Now, this is a completely new idea for me! Bilbo offered Frodo to come and live with him at Bag End just a week after the funeral. But Frodo was not ready to part from his parents, not yet! It's different from a lot of other stories I've read so far, but it's absolutely believable! I would really like to know how things develop in the following years. Is there a chance for a sequel? Please? |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/30/2005 |
| Sadness and grief can be overwhelming. I'm sorry Frodo didn't take Bilbo up on the offer then, really, but can certainly understand. |
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| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/29/2005 |
| I'm so glad you got this posted! I keep thinking about the song--it really is so Frodo. You did a very good job with this, Nina dear. |
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