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| To Become A Queen by Madeleine | 56 Review(s) |
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| SimplegirlfromLP | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 5/7/2020 |
| Great story. I really enjoyed reading Eomer’s point of view. And Hubba Hubba to their first time together. | |
| SimplegirlfromLP | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/5/2020 |
| What a great way to end the chapter....I am panting. Good Gravy, I can't wait to read the next chapter. This chapter was thoroughly enjoyable with the banter between the siblings, I loved the build up of the anticipation of getting to the meeting place where Lothiriel would finally get to see Eomer after months apart. It was great to get to be in her head while she maneuvers through her feelings all the while dealing with crazy brothers, was awesome and great fun. I hope you get to read this since you haven't posted here in a while, but thank you for writing. :) | |
| Tari | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 4/6/2011 |
| The wedding ceremony was beautiful and gown sounds gorgeous. She must have been a very beautiful bride. This is the beginning of a wonderful life for her. | |
| whitewave | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 6/29/2008 |
| Lothy and Eomer's dialogue in this chapter had me in stitches! Her comparison and previous experience/knowledge of the act was so funny, esp. the ones of the tortoises. The foot massage was a splendid touch. Her reaction to his arousal was very comical and I re-read it a number of times. Enjoyed this story very much and I'll never get tired of saying that about your work. | |
| whitewave | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/29/2008 |
| Loved the scene of Lothy with her menfolk just moments before her wedding. It was endearing and a bit sad because she's moving on to another stage of life. It was cool that Gandalf presided over the ceremony and the unique vows was a nice touch. | |
| whitewave | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/29/2008 |
| The making up scene and his innuendo about her taking her rest (but for the wedding ceremony) reduced me to squeeing fan girl again. Lothy's first entrance to Edoras evoked very vivid images--much like watching a historical fiction movie. I really enjoy how you draw your characters--their personalities are distinct and you stay committed to it all throughout. Loved the lines: “Stop those gimmicks. You are not a colt any more” and the scene where Lothy overhears her brothers discussing what's going to happen after their sister's wedding and how she outsmarted them. | |
| whitewave | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/29/2008 |
| whitewave | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/29/2008 |
| Poor Eomer! How you tortured him--always interrupted at the most critical moment. Loved how Lothy admitted what she felt about his attentions. I appreciate Elfhelm's presence here. Loved Erchirion's comment about Amrothos extending his stay in Rohan, Eomer's unconventional way of silencing Eothain and of course the whole "cleft" dialogue. Amrothos is entertaining as usual: “Indeed,” Amrothos found it necessary to support his sister. “It is called the cleft between the buttocks.” It's great that Imrahil also participated in it. The Dol Amroth folks sure are interesting. Lothy could not have had a better intro to the Mark as her treatment of Eothain. | |
| whitewave | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/29/2008 |
| Loved how Eomer could ruffle Elphir's feathers without even trying and as usual, enjoyed all of Amrothos' lines again. Loved the scene when he slid off her glove; when he interrupted her bath and when he laced up her gown--so sexy! It's nice to read how complementary Lothy's personality is with Eomer's and how they can work well together for Rohan. | |
| whitewave | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/29/2008 |
| I very much enjoyed the interaction between her three brothers here, Elphir was trapped though I can't say I felt sorry for him even if his wife is not so good for him. Amrothos is witty and entertaining as usual. Laughed at Erchirion's line: “He thinks Father was still experimenting when he begot Elphir . . . and the experiment went wrong.” Loved how you tortured Elphir. I enjoyed the brother-sister bonding moment here with Erchirion as well. Eomer's and Lothy's "first meeting" here was simple but had sexy undertones. | |