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Frodo's Bane and Pippin's Stomach  by Analyn 2 Review(s)
AntaneReviewed Chapter: 8 on 12/1/2007
He had learned early on that Frodo often wanted to hold someone’s hand, when the pain began to grow, he would automatically reach out for someone. Or if it was really intense he would just grab hold of the nearest thing (even if it meant clutching at his own clothes or to clutch at his heart as he tried to fight the pain). But that never did anything. It would only leave him gasping, breathless, and in tears. What would always help was to hold a hand. Whether it was just the comforting presence of a friend, or the physical warmth of the hand, Pippin hadn’t thought to ask.

Ah love! Such heroism displayed here in the silent suffering but always there was the need for love and warmth. Thank you for this.

Namare, God bless, Antane :)

PeriantariReviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/25/2004
I love this chapter and this story as a whole~!! please continue with it soon... i'm such a sucker for Weathertop to Rivendell stories that I would love to hear more of a different take on what happened going there~ =)
and i've read up to the last chapter that you have posted, but this one is my favorite... probably because of so much h/c going on ;) awwww poor Frodo~!!! but Pippin is being so brave and sweet that he is just so endearing =) I love the story that Pippin told Frodo... that was so great :D
keep this going Arwen~! (amidst all the papers ;)
great job... you do h/c very well :) (especially with Pippin's comfort part.. awwww~!!!)

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