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| Darling Son by Antane | 4 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/14/2006 |
| Yes, there is one of the brothers to come, to be born soon in Number 3 to Bell and Hamfast. A lovely diary. | |
| Queen Galadriel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/14/2006 |
| Awwww! Antane, this was perfect for Valentine's Day, and so very sweet! You do Primula's POV excellently-one would think you'd lived it. I mean it! And I'm so glad to see this at last! You know I've been looking forward to it. :) God bless, Galadriel Author Reply: Glad you enjoyed, dearest! Namarie, God bless, Antane :) | |
| Frodo Baggins | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/14/2006 |
| Oh, Antane! This has left me almost breathless. It's so sweet and sad at the same time. I must say, you are such a wonderful author, because you can write a number of stories from different points of view and make them all look real adn like that character was writing it. Hannon le! Namarie adn God Bless. Ever yours, Frodo Baggins Author Reply: Hannon le, my dear Frodo! And also for all those wonderful reviews of Love Letters. I am so glad you are enjoying. I can't wait until you are an author here too and people discover what a wonderful writer you are too! Namarie, God bless, Antane :) | |
| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/14/2006 |
| Oh this was lovely Antane we get so little from her POV. And to fore-shadow Sam & Frodo's relationship and the boating trip in this way was great. My only question is... do you really think that Bilbo would/could have waited nine whole months to meet this special cousin that shared his birthday? But I loved this anyway Antane. BTW Spotted a couple of typos! The main one being at the end. I don’t believe your father and I can give you what you seek, my darling, but perhaps {you will have} you will have a brother anyway. Keep gifting us with your writing Antane Author Reply: Hannon le, harrowcat for this and all your other reviews! I corrected that big typo (thank you). I thought it would be cute for Sam to 'recognize' his future brother. Thanks for liking that! As far as Bilbo goes, he's got so many relations, he probably thought, not another one, but then he goes to see him and changes his mind completely! :) Namarie, God bless, Antane :) | |