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A Light in this Dark World  by Elanor Silmariën 10 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/7/2006
Ah, love it when the prosaic gardener nevertheless speaks Sindarin.

Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/6/2006
Aw, I don't want it to be over! :) Oh, Ellie, this is so precious! I just love the image of Frodo running to Sam with almost enough force to tackle him to the ground! LOL! I never tire of reading of that glad reunion, and you portray it beautifully! You do Frodo's POV very well. Keep writing and let us see some more! :)
God bless,
Galadriel

Author Reply: Glad you liked it! I really do enjoy writing from Frodo's pov, and I'm glad you think I do it well.
God bless,
Ellie

Frodo BagginsReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/6/2006
Oh yea, Ellie! Such a beautiful ending to a beautiful story! I loved this piece. Wonderfully told, dear. I love the part how Frodo tried to tackle Sam in his excitment but couldn't. I've actually bounced off a cousin trying to do that in tackle football. :) Keep writing, keep writing!! :)
GOd Bless,
Frodo Baggins

Author Reply: glad you liked it. I'd like to see that happen!!! I think my brother's done that before, but I'm too afraid to play tackle football to try it!
God bless,
Ellie

Frodo BagginsReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/6/2006
Oh this is wonderful, Ellie! So sad and sweet...bittersweet. I love your stories
Frodo Baggins

Author Reply: Glad you liked it!
God bless,
Ellie

Arwen of LorianReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/4/2006
Yes! I love your moving story, very realistic, very deep, very thoughful. Short and sweet. Sam and Frodo are more than best friends! Keep telling your great stories Elanor! Nammarie-lorain, Arwen


Author Reply: Oh this is you, isn't it? Glad you liked it!! Have you sent in a story yet? See you later, God bless,
Elanor

Frodo BagginsReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/3/2006
Oh this was so sad, Ellie! Very sweet though. Hannon le, mellon nin. Keep writing! I'm enjoying your stories so much. :)
God Bless,
Frodo Baggins

Author Reply: I am so glad you are enjoying them! I am enjoying yours as well!
God bless, mellon nin!
Elanor

Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/2/2006
*sob* Oh, oh that is so sad! How sweet of Sam to give Frodo that blanket to remember his "little star" by! *wipes eyes*

Sorry the review for chapter 2 didn't go through. I wrote one, but my connection suddenly died, and it somehow got lost. I did love it though, especially the part about Rosie's and Elanor's having elven smiles. How sweet! I gather this is the prequel to "Stories Beyond the Havens?"
God bless,
Galadriel

Author Reply: Glad you liked it! Well, it can be the prequal, but not really. I was trying a new writing style and this popped into my mind without even thinking about "Havens". I'd never even thought of that before!
Thanks for reviewing!
Namarie,
Elanor

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/2/2006
Yes, these are two excellent reason for hanging on as he can.

Author Reply: Thanks for reviewing!
God bless, Elanor

Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/28/2006
*sniff* Oh, now you've got me all teary-eyed! :) This was beautiful-not so angsty it can't be born (I have a bad habit of doing that), yet angsty enough to get the point across. And that last line was just so poignant! Excellent read!
God bless,
Galadriel

Author Reply: Wow, thanks! I am glad it wasn't too angsty, I wasn't sure...
God bless, Elanor

AntaneReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/28/2006
Very good! Ah, the love between those two...

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Author Reply: You gotta love 'em! Glad you liked it!
Elanor

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