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Peregrin and Diamond  by Pearl Took 6 Review(s)
AspenJulesReviewed Chapter: 9 on 7/20/2006
Oh, that was PRICELESS!! However much Pippin and his sisters might tease or torment each other, it does NOT pay for an outsider to tackle them!

I loved Pervinca's gleeful counting to twenty each time, ROFL!

And finally, dunking her rear end in the water and then marching her into the middle of the dance floor? No doubt in the minds of anyone there that she had gotten on the wrong side of the Took lasses, and no more than she deserved, the wretched little witch!

Author Reply: Thank you, AspenJules :) One oughtn't mess with the Tooks ;) I thoroughly enjoyed writing this bit, hehehe

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 9 on 5/28/2006
Most suitable revenge, and all there know that Persimmone has fairly earned the ire of the Tooks. Beautifully done.

Author Reply: Thank you so much, Larner! Oh yes - she definitely got what she deserved! Thank you :) :)

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 5/7/2006
Oh, the Terrible Took Sisters to the rescue--yeay! What a sour persimmone! LOL, she got hers, though. Pearl should've let him go with the sword, lol. Poor Diamond is going to wake up in the morning with a humungous hangover.

Excellent, excellent chapter! :-)

Pippinfan

Author Reply: Yes, they save the day :) Persimmone is most sour. Hopefully our lad would have stopped short of murder but it would have been great for him to scare her near to death ;)

Thank so very much, dear PF :)

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 9 on 5/7/2006
I love Pippin's sisters in this. I also liked how frustrated Pippin was that he couldn't do anything himself since she was a lass. Very funny chapter. I do feel sorry for Diamond but it looks as if she has the Took sisters in her corner now and so I am guessing she will be fine. LOL

Author Reply: Thank you, GW :) I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and enjoyed the humor. Oh yes! You want the Took Sisters on your side in any battle :) :)

Elven_princessReviewed Chapter: 9 on 5/4/2006
WOW!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Its so cute!! It's romantic but funny!! Wow, the dress sounded beautiful!! You are an amazing author!! Hurry up and post the rest of the story!! You inspired me to write a Pippin/Diamond story!! Thanks for sharing!

Author Reply: Thank you, Elven_princess :) Your enthusiasm is encouraging! Thank you for all the kind words :)

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 9 on 5/4/2006
It's a sad shame that Diamond's memory of that ball, where she first danced with Pippin, will be ruined by the recollection of Persimmone's treachery and her subsequent behaviour. Not to mention hearing later of the Took sisters' suitable, but very public, vengeance. She will be squirming.

On the other hand, the Three Sisters have certainly shown which of the two girls has their approval. And Sam and Rosie will be mad as fire with the Bolger lass. And Pippin's protectionism has just been ratched up another couple of dozen notches.

Still. She'll probably be too embarrassed to enjoy Persimmone's humiliation properly - and she'll never be able to enjoy that dress properly...

Author Reply: I don't know that I've thought too much about how much might ruin Diamond's memories of that night. There always seems to be a lot that I don't think of that readers do. We'll have to see what you think of how it all pans out. :)

Yes, the sisters know a nasty bit of goods when they see it ;) And it is one more thing showing Pippin (and Merry) that Diamond is a different sort of lass.

Thank you so much for reading this and responding, Bodkin! It really means a lot to me :)

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