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Web of Treason  by Linda Hoyland 3 Review(s)
BodkinReviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/1/2006
Poor Faramir. At least his brains are still working, in spite of his grief. The clothing change is probably a good move for him - if not for the other man.

But what a message to have to take to Arwen!



Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I don't envy Faramir at all.
Your comments about "A Streak of Moonlight" inspired me to add a few more lines to it,thank you !

RadbooksReviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/29/2006
Oh, good chapter. I am worried that Faramir is being followed now and don't think he should have left his escort. I hope that wasn't a gave mistake on his part, but he must have felt he really didn't have any other choice. I still want to shake him though!!! That he doesn't realize that Aragorn isn't alive and suffering somewhere. Though, I wonder why he doesn't feel Aragorn's pain. Anyway, good chapter and looking forward to more.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you enjoyed the chapter.I think Faramir is still in a state of shock after seeing the body and not familiar enough with Thought Bonding to know how to properly use it.
He is going to find his visit to Arwen very informative.

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/29/2006
Alas, poor Aragorn.

Alas, poor Anborn; I hope we'll see him again.

Faramir needs some aspirin and time in a hot-tub with Eowyn. Not to mention his King back. You haven't really killed off our many-named monarch, have you?

Where's Gandalf when you really, really need him? Or Galadriel with her handy Mirror?

More soon I hope, plus somebody giving Roheryn some exercise!

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I was suffering severe deprivation with the other place being down !

They are all in a mess,aren't they?Whatever would I do for a hobby if Aragorn were dead? We do indeed need Gandalf and Galadriel.

I can hear Roheryn neighing for some attention now,even the horses are in mourning !

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