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My Sword Sings - Book One - 'My Sword' Series  by Agape4Gondor 2 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 20 on 9/18/2006
Good! Eomund at least still lives, and the rest for the moment are all safe.]

I'm glad Indis knows where she is, for I don't. Heh!

Author Reply: LOL - I'm glad Indis knew where she was too... I like to put a little 'unknown' history in this - keep it seemingly alive.

As for them all safe - I'm glad you qualified that with a 'for the moment!'

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 20 on 9/4/2006
What a truly scummy thing, to beat up a little kid like that. Good job on writing Faramir here, he comes across as enough of a child to be scared and tearful, but still enough of the future Captain Faramir to remain defiantly loyal to his brother.

Author Reply: I hated to have the violence - but they are all in such a hideous tight spot. The one who is orchestrating all of this is definitely evil...

Bless little Faramir and Boromir... they are not finished with their suffering.

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