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The Latter Days  by Elanor Silmariën 6 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/21/2006
Poor Daisy and May, not having much of a chance ever with the object of their desires. But at least they've found Fredegar and Lobelia and Will Whitfoot.

Author Reply: Poor girls, indeed! Lol.
God bless,
Ellie

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/10/2006
Seems in all his time in the Lockholes Freddy didn't lose his sense of humor completely. I felt so sorry for Lobelia in this. She was never a nice hobbit but she had lost so very much in it all.

Author Reply: Freddy's great, isn't he? I felt sorry for Lobelia too, thought I was crazy, but I guess I'm not alone! Thanks for reviewing!
God bless,
Ellie

Frodo BagginsReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/8/2006
Oh Ellie! Another wonderful chapter to a truly wonderful story!! Good show! Namarie, mellon nin!
God Bless,
Frodo Baggins

Author Reply: Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it!
God bless,
Ellie

Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/7/2006
Oh, I was so excited to see another one up so soon! :) You know, Ellie, if I may say so, I've seen great improvement in your writing even since you've joined SOA. Wish I improved that fast! :)

Everyone is so wonderfully in character here! I had to laugh at the Gamgee sisters still liking Frodo, thinking back to "Pride..." Sounds as if Sam has some explaining to do to Rosie yet. I said everyone is in character, and so they are, but I'm especially impressed with how well you do Frodo's perspective! It's amazing! Can't wait for more, as always. :)
God bless,
Galadriel

Author Reply: Thank you very much!!! *blush*
God bless,
Ellie

Arwen of LorienReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/7/2006
Aww, I liked this chapter alot! You R such a good writer.
Now we all feel kindly towards Lobelia, and sad again for Frodo.
All that work! (Never realized!)And he is already so used up inside. I am glad
Sam and Merry + Pip are there and strong for him.
I like the way you write as if you were reading right out of Frodos diary!
Next! Next! Next! Bacon! ;) ~God bless,~Arwen

Author Reply: Bacon! Thank you very much, Arwen! What would Frodo do without his best friend and favorite cousins?
God bless,
Ellie

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/7/2006
Poor Frodo. Poor prisoners, there in the lockholes.

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