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Black Eyes  by Lialathuveril 4 Review(s)
whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/24/2008
The image of Lady Eileniel was so vivid in my mind. Laughed out loud on her first guess as to who attacked Eomer!

Author Reply: Ah, the jelly fish lady! But she met her match in Lothiriel.

Alison HReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/24/2006
Ah, the opening to this chapter was just so sweet.I laughed at Eomer's "You know, you shouldn't really do that" after Lothiriel's stretch.It was funny to realise that Lothiriel just let Eomer see more of her then she ever intended! Eomer's amusement and his sly grin really shouldn't be allowed--it's too darn sexy :D

"Tell them to go away" had me laughing again and Lothiriel really needs to wake up for when she has to face her father.I'm glad Eomer and Lothiriel are now warming to each other.Oh, and I loved Lothiriel's impressive display in getting rid of the annoying Lady Eilinel.Lothiriel with claws--I like that!

Hope you're feeling better and update when you can--but soon ;D

Ali.

Author Reply: Hello Ali,
it's a good thing Eomer is so honourable, isn't it. I don't think Lothiriel is quite awake yet, though, at least not to her feelings.

As for Lady Eilinel, I almost felt sorry for her. After all Lothiriel tried to foist Eomer off on her not 24 hours earlier...

I hope to update next weekend if my ears play along. And dear Auntie Ivriniel might make a short comeback in the next chapter.

Lia

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/24/2006
I think Lothiriel might regret not have had a moment to put on a few clothes - it's a bit difficult to take the high ground when you know that underneath Eomer's cloak, you are wearing very little!

And it sounds as if she is definitely warming to Eomer, even if she doesn't fancy the suit of the King of Rohan. And I reckon he's on her side now - I can't imagine Eomer foisting Eowyn into a marriage without her consent and he won't take Lothiriel on those terms. Although he's interested! He's definitely interested.

Lady Eilinel doesn't stand a chance - Eomer doesn't want to be lunch.

I hope Imrahil doesn't put his foot in this - things are actually working out quite well.

Author Reply: Hello Bodkin,
it's all in the mind! Of course she could have disappeared behind some bushes on the way back, but it's just so much more fun this way.

I agree Eomer would not want an unwilling wife (just imagine Lothiriel doing her worst in Rohan...) and that she is slowly warming to him. Mind you, I don't think she realizes this yet.

And I'm not sure what jellyfish eat (algea?), but I don't think Eomer would go down without a fight!

Lia

Macphisto's girlReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/23/2006
Thanks for post another chapter of this adorable story! I'm enjoying it a lot.
Hope that you're feeling better... you need to rest this weekend!
Take care, (and I really meant it!)

C.

Author Reply: Hello Celeste,
I think I need to write this weekend... but I've already got some ideas for the next chapter and I enjoy writing (when my brain cooperates).

Thank you for your good wishes and take care, too!
Lia

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