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|Yours to command by Lialathuveril||290 Review(s)|
|Tari||Reviewed Chapter: 34 on 9/29/2010|
|This story was so addictive that when I got to the last six chapters I couldn't stop reading. Deep inside, I had hoped the blow to the side of her head would restore her sight. That didn't happened, but she never minded being blind.|
We must be on the same page. Right after Wilwarin was banished from Gondor, I found myself wishing she would be married off to Girion The Fat. When I read that is what happended, I thought to myself that it couldn't have happened to a nicer person (not that she's nice).
My hat is off to you for an excellent job. I know I will have to read more of your stories.
Is the Garden Of Ithilien another site for reading stories (not that I need another one)?
Author Reply: Hello Tari,
addictive is what I'm aiming for, so that's good to hear! ;-) And while writing the story, I did consider whether she would regain her sight, but it seemed to much like a fairy tale to me - too pat. Plus the point is really that in the end her blindness doesn't matter to them.
As for Wilwarin, I didn't want to give it away earlier on, but I think it's a fitting fate!
And all my stories are on this site; the Garden of Ithilien is a writing forum I belong to, but it doesn't have an archive of stories with it. So I hope you'll enjoy the other scenarios as well and again thanks for taking the time to review!
|Tari||Reviewed Chapter: 23 on 9/27/2010|
|Awesome. Arwen did exactly what I would have done; sent the witch back to her home until further notice. She should be left there forever.|
Author Reply: And hello again!
I was tempted to let Eowyn have her way, but then decided to send her home instead ;-) And the last chapter will come back to Wilwarin briefly to tie up that loose thread.
|Tari||Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 9/17/2010|
|Lotheriel said it all; "What fun". And what fun it was to read. This is was an excellent way for Eomer to get to know her a little bit better.|
Author Reply: Hello Tari,
yes, I agree. And as he gets to know her better, he might realize she's not quite as helpless as her family thinks.
Thanks for taking the time to review
|whitewave||Reviewed Chapter: 34 on 6/26/2008|
|I enjoyed this story as well and look forward to all the possible scenarios that you and Lady Bluejay can think of. |
Author Reply: Thanks! As you know we're both in the middle of the next one, but I'm sure there are a few more to come.
|whitewave||Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 6/26/2008|
|Enjoyed the reconciliation scene here! Lothy deserved that very thorough kiss! |
Author Reply: I almost feel bad for what I put them through. And what's even worse, I enjoyed doing it ;-)
|whitewave||Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 6/26/2008|
|I went back and re-read all the neat stuff you placed at the beginning of every chapter and found them so very nice. Thanks for replying to all my reviews. |
Author Reply: I really enjoyed making up the quotations, even though some of them took considerable time and research (e.g. the poem).
And thanks to you for reviewing!
|whitewave||Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 6/25/2008|
|Very nice romantic tension going on. Loved it, the custom about the ribbons was very sweet. Hope Eomer gets to claim his reward soon.|
Author Reply: Well, as you've probably found out by now Eomer did manage to claim his ribbon in the end! Even if it was a bit of a rough road there.
Thanks for reviewing and I hope you enjoyed the rest of the story!
|whitewave||Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 6/25/2008|
|Loved the fireboat custom for this story and laughed out loud about the childhoood pranks of Faramir. Too bad we didn't get to hear Eomer's.|
Author Reply: Maybe I'll have to include some of Eomer's pranks in another story. It's a tempting idea!
|whitewave||Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/25/2008|
|Loved how she came to his rescue this time! |
Author Reply: Bet he didn't expect that!
|whitewave||Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 6/25/2008|
|This is one of your most exciting chapters yet. Was on the edge of my seat (almost literally). The images were so vivid in my mind that I felt like I was watching a movie. |
Author Reply: Like I said before, it is a kind of movie in my mind. Shame it's so much work to get it on paper though! But it's good to hear I managed to get the images across for you.