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Four Nights and Three Days  by Antane 10 Review(s)
Frodo BagginsReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/22/2006
Oooh, you have my stomach in knots! THis is wonderful. Frodo's letter is on it's way. Namarie!
im mil le,
God Bless,
Frodo Baggins

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/21/2006
The need to reopen the wound not just once but twice must have been devastating to Sam, Merry, and Pippin. But they do all they can to assist and not get in the way, and to encourage Frodo to hang on in spite of all else.

Love Sam here, and Pippin's quickness to try to help.

Author Reply: Hantanyel, my dear Larner!

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

ElemmírëReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/21/2006
I like how you are writing all the hobbits descriptions from Elrond's POV, as he does not know who is who yet. All the Elf lord sees is three little hobbits who care and love their stricken friend very much. He also sees that these three need to be active and help with their friend's care and allows them to do those little things to help him without being in the way as well.

Poor, dear Frodo.

I can't wait to read the rest, Antane!

~Elemmírë~

Author Reply: Hannon le, my dear! Glad you are enjoying!

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/21/2006
Ooo! I'm so excited about this story! I love Elrond's POV here, and the Hobbits' gentle and loving care and so obvious anxiety. Poor dears, I know they're exhausted, and everything goes from very bad to three times worse when you're tired. I can't wait to see more of this!
God bless,
Galadriel

Author Reply: Hantanyel, ammelda!

Namarie, God bless, Melinyel, Antane :)

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/21/2006
A good beginning, Antane. Professor Tolkien certain left these days open to our own interpretation, and I enjoy seeing how different writers imagine these events. The solicitious hobbits and mighty Elf Lord are a wonderful team.

Author Reply: Hannon le, shirebound - glad you are reading and enjoying! :)

Namarie, God bless, Antane

ArmarielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/21/2006
Awww a new one! I like that it starts out in Elrond's p.o.v. (But I wonder how long they stay in the room before he shoos them out for making a fuss!;))

I look forward to seeing what comes next...........

~~~{~@

Author Reply: Hannon le, my dear! Would you like being Elrond trying to get the hobbits to leave their dearest? I wouldn't!

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/21/2006
This is a great start Antane. I like the way that you are showing the hobbits but not naming them yet.

Author Reply: Hantanyel, my dear harrowcat. I originally was going to do this as an expansion of Children of Iluvatar but then it kinda just grew into its own tale. :)

Namarie, God bless, Antane

AltheaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/20/2006
What a great beginning! I like the fact that you have not only Sam, but also Merry and Pippin present as Elrond tries to save Frodo. Sam's comforting Frodo as Elrond begins his work is especially touching. I am looking forward to reading more of this story.

Author Reply: Hannon le, Althea for your kind review! Sam is love itself.

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

lotrgirl1415Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/20/2006
*feelsstupid* I mean I cant wait till the next UPDATE.

ugh....sorry!:(

--Katie

lotrgirl1415Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/20/2006
I am very excited about this plot!can't wait till the next review!

I heart u Antane!
--Katie

Author Reply: Thank you so much, Katie. Glad you are enjoying! :)

Namarie, God bless, Antane

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