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| Aragorn's Revenge by Estelle | 7 Review(s) |
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| Lady Larien | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/2/2003 |
| Awww...that was wonderful! Simply wonderful! *many smiles* This story is on my favorites for sure, and you are, too! One little quip with this last chapter: The sentence "It is half past three in the morning my dear prince. I think it could wait until morning" is kind of awkward because you say its 3 in the morning (implying that it is already morning) and then you say it could wait until morning. I'd suggest something like ""It is half past three in the morning my dear prince. I think it could wait until the sun is up." Keep writing! Awesome job! You kept me entertained and laughing through every chapter! God bless, -Larien Author Reply: Thanks for the little quip again. My morning is a time when I can actually think coherently so I didn't think 3am as morning. More like an ungodly hour to me. LOL! Anyway, I will keep that in mind if I write more ungodly hour fics. LMAO! I really appreciate your kind reviews since this is my first piece of work and my first try at LOTR humor... well, second try if you consider "The Haircut" the first. :) I'm currently posting my second fic (By The Hands of Another). More serious, not much humor but lots of pain and angst. If you're interested, please R&R :) | |
| Lady Larien | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/2/2003 |
| Heh heh heh...funny, but I must be sympathetic, too...aww forget it! The mental picture is just tooooo funny! :) Author Reply: LOL!!! You should be sympathetic *eg* But I would be drooling over a half naked elf... oops... did I say that? *innocent smile* *huggles Legolas wraps a blanket around him* | |
| Lady Larien | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/2/2003 |
| OMG! LMAO! This is hillarious but I can't belive it! Aragorn can't be responsible for ALL that can he? It must be one of Elladan and Elrohir's hunting traps. Right? *raises eyebrows questioningly* Author Reply: Yes, it's just a hunting trap. Aragorn would do a lot of things to humiliate Legolas but he would *never* hurt him. Not in this kind of way :) You're good! :D | |
| Lady Larien | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/2/2003 |
| Hi! This is Simply Sara from FF.net, here like I said I'd be! This is great so far! :) One little spelling err: In the second paragraph, fifth sentence, you say "And that wasn't the worse." It should be "And that wasn't the *worst*". Now onto the next chapter...*smiles at the many lovely prospects of what Aragorn could do* Author Reply: Ahh, thanks for pointing out the mistake. I'll correct it in a jiffy IF my stupid internet connection would allow me to stay online for 5 minutes! LOL! *kicks her uni server* | |
| Elvenesse | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/5/2003 |
| Just to let you know that I've read and enjoyed this story so far, and I'm now waiting for the next chapter. Author Reply: Chapter 4 is up and it's the last one. :) I'll be posting a new story shortly. Hope you'll continue to read :) | |
| Miriel | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/2/2003 |
| Oh no! Sweet revenge gone bad! I wonder who shot our fair wood-elf. To be continued...have any other words ever been so cruel? Author Reply: Well, no one shot him. It was a hunting trap. :) He just happened to stumble upon it *eg* *puts on dented halo* Anyway, Part 4 will be the last installment so keep reading :D Cheers!! | |
| Miriel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/2/2003 |
| Legolas' over cautiosness is hilarious! uh-oh. Nothing in the food or clothes...and their going of into the wild together. Can't wait to see what happens next! Author Reply: Hehehe, glad you liked it. And thank you for the review! Legolas is getting kinda paranoid, isn't he? ;) | |