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| Wound of a Long Burden by Speedy Hobbit | 4 Review(s) |
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| Antane | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/31/2006 |
| You do Frodo and angst very well and since I love both very much I think I know what I am talking about! :) The whole thing is good, but I love the end when he wants to comfort Sam - he is in such desperate need of comfort and solace himself and the moment he gets it, he wants to give comfort himself. Very nice. I would, however, proof this a bit better as there are several typos, but overall very well done! Namarie, God bless, Antane :) | |
| Elemmírë | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/30/2006 |
| Don't delude yourself into thinking your writing is "crappy" as you put it in your author's note. This was good! I thought you set the tone for Frodo's recurrent angst very well and as a reader, I was brought into the story and feeling for the character. My only nitpick--check your spelling more carefully. A few words here and there were missing a letter or two. :D I hope you continue to write more in the future. ~Elemmírë~ | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/30/2006 |
| First, don't talk ill of yourself, or you will end up fulfilling your worst expectations. You will rise only to what you attempt. A fair beginning to writing angst. And write to your strengths, my friend. Figure out what they are and write to them--that's the best way to start. Then push the envelope a bit and develop new ones. You did that with this story. Keep trying and keep it up. | |
| lotrgirl1415 | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/29/2006 |
| It was very well written and sad...Poor Frodo. *reads your AN* Nobody better flame you or they'll regret it...;) I loved it lots and lots keep up the great work! --Katie | |