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| Finding Celebrian by Dragon | 1 Review(s) |
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| Winter | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 4/13/2004 |
| I cannot believe I'm the only person to have reviewed this story. I thought it was a very well written piece. I especially like how you handled each character individually, showing how Celebrain's capture affected each differently. This is also one of the very few stories that caused me to cry in some places. I very much liked how you never went into great detail about what was done to Celebrain, nor the injuries she sustained. (I think this was a nice touch because you showed her physical injuries were infact secondary to what she and her family were going through mentally.) I kinda wish you would have allowed Elrond to display a little more emotion especially toward the twins. I know he loved his wife dearly, but, as a father, I think he would have been as concerned for the welfare of his children also, especially in light of what the twins saw and went through. Over all, an amazing story told with alot of care to detail. thanks!! Winter ;) | |