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Bits & Pieces  by Edoraslass 2 Review(s)
Elena TirielReviewed Chapter: 5 on 12/31/2006
You delineated the differing reactions of the Riders very realistically here -- not easy in the space of a drabble! And a chilling last line....

- Barbara

Author Reply: Oh, that took me forever to whittle down to 100 words, so I'm very glad it worked!
Thank you!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 5 on 12/29/2006
Tornadoes can be so destructive. And it would indeed have taken them mostly by surprise. Have lived through a few myself.

Author Reply: Yep, every spring they come tearing through this state. They don't call it "Tornado Alley" for nothin'. :)
Thanks!

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