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The Deep Watches  by Lily Frost 3 Review(s)
DaynawaynaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/31/2007
Lily, I like how you show Eowyn's strength and meekness combined into the powerful shieldmaiden she is. I like that she drove darkness away and brought in clean smells and fresh air, even if it could not totally drive away Death. Beautifully written. :)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/30/2007
Other than the fact that Eomer and Eowyn were the children of Theoden's sister rather than his wife's, this is just right, Lily Frost. Very, very beautiful, and the mood superbly described. And love the typical ending to a tale that has become part of a people's oral tradition. Very well done indeed.

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/30/2007
Poor Éowyn. How alone she must have felt - Éomer exiled, Théoden a victim of Saruman's evil, Théodred dying - and Grima, always watching. Creepy!

I like her lighting all the candles, and especially opening the windows to let the air in. That would probably feel more comforting for Théodred, too.


Jay

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