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Between Friends  by Agape4Gondor 7 Review(s)
Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/17/2007
Wonderfully unique, at least in my reading experience. It's haunting.

Well done, Agape!

Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/15/2007
The summary caught my attention, and I had to read. Very chilling, and very well done.
God bless,
Galadriel

Author Reply: Thank you and for the blessing besides!

DaynawaynaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/15/2007
THAT was SO COOL.

You summed it up so beautifully A4G. Very well written.

Author Reply: THANK YOU!!!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/14/2007
I read this on the list, and am very impressed. Oh, poor Smeagol, to have lost that love in such a way.

Heart deceived by the Ring made by the Deceiver.

Author Reply: Thank you, Larner. *blushes* not used to writing poetry but that's what I 'heard' and so it was written as heard... poor Smeagol???? LOL - poor Deagol!

And didn't Smeagol end up being the Deceiver - to himself, to Deagol, to Sauron, and to Frodo...

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/14/2007
A very chilling twist at the end, I liked this.

Author Reply: Thanks Linda - that last line was most difficult to figure out - but well worth the time spent on it!

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/14/2007
Well I guess that was sweet considering who you were writing about!LOL Happy Valentines Day!

Author Reply: When I first 'heard' it - I thought it was too whimsical and sickly sweet - until that last line of the first stanza... then I realized why I was being asked to write....

Happy Valentine's to you to! And thanks for the comment! Appreciate all...

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/14/2007
Well, Gollum's one true love was that little band of gold. Valentine's Day must have been very odd for them all those years; what does one give the Ring that has your soul?

Original idea and nice poetry.

Author Reply: Oh - I like that Raksha - I had the idea that the Valetine was for Deagol - but it probably was for the Ring - for did it not hold his heart and soul!?!

*shivers*

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